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GigiOnce there was a girl named gigi who was a pure blooded witch. But unlike some witches, Gigi was a good witch who was still learning to use her powers. About a week efore her 15th birthday which was the day when she would have to leave her home to practice magic on her own for two years. On the day of her 15th birthday she suddenly came down with acold so she had to stay with her family till it was gone.After a week of being sick Gigi was finally going to have yto leave her home.About a yaer later she ran into a man named Meso and as she saw him she suddenly callapsed and Meso and Shiniju rushed over to her but couldn't figure out what was wrong. So after hours of trying to figure out what was wrong Meso decided to transfer his healing factor to her long enough to cure her. Two days later Gigi suddenly woke up to find that Meso was sitting next to her."Sir who are you and why did you help me"?"My name is Meso and Ihelped you because other wise you would have died.""Well thank you ve
WarWar is a scary thing, but when a war ends something good happens. After all the death of soldiers and civilians, the winner has more land. After all the death the winner has more power. After all the death the loser is able to be controlled more easily.I write about the Iraq war and all the terrorism out there.
The end?After staying a night in the town, the group left in search for the next town. About 7 months later Meso again felt Syucas presence.Shes close I can tell.How close?I dont know exactly how far away she is but she is close enough that we need to hide.Master where are we going to hide, there is no trees or tall grass around.I am aware of that, so I am going to make some trees my self.What. How are you going to make trees?Watch and learn. Right as he was done talking Meso rose up his left hand and trees started appearing from the ground.Wow.Remember I can control most elements including earth. But about 2 minutes later the group heard trees falling.What the, who is cutting down the trees?MESO I AM COMING FOR YOUR HEAD.Everyone get out of here.Not without you Master.Would you stop calling me master. I told